Essay Tips

 

Scholarship Essay Instructions

• The final essay should be ONE page only, font size 12, Arial or Times New Roman with a total of 6 paragraphs

• Each section of the body should have only two to three sentences.

• Have someone else review, provide feedback, and edit your essay.

• Do NOT include your name in the essay or on the essay.

• The foundational “My Story” essay can be “tweaked” and used over and over again to complete a majority of all required college admission and scholarship essays.

• Failure to follow these instructions may result in a disqualification of your application.

• Answer the questions below as a guide to organize your main ideas.

  • NOTE: Prior winners cannot resubmit their high school essay for the college application. They may use their high school essay as a starting point for their prior winners scholarship application essay but should revise and update it to reflect their college experience.

 

I. Introduction

 

The opening sentence and paragraph must catch the reader’s attention and interest.

II. Body

 

A. Family

• Describe your family: ethnic background, gender, country of origin, number of brothers/sisters, parents’ educational background and occupation.

• Mention any special circumstances such as: single parent home, illness, death, disability, divorce, or mobility.

 

B.   Obstacle, Overcoming, Character Qualities

• Describe one of your most challenging obstacles and how did you overcome it?

• What character qualities have you learned, are presently learning, or need to learn from your obstacle?

• Explain how this obstacle will help you to become successful in the future.

 

C. Community Service, Leadership, Role Model

• Describe two or three contributions you have made in community service.

• When and where have you served others?

• How has it made you a better person? What impact did you make?

• What did you learn about life, yourself, or other people?

 

D. Life Purpose, Direction of Study

• Explain your dreams for the future, educational, and career goals.

• What are the reasons you are seeking this field of study?

• How can you contribute to society or make a difference in the lives of others?

 

III. Conclusion

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• Why do you want to attend university/college? Why do you need a scholarship?

• Describe in detail any special family circumstances that will affect your ability to obtain assistance in reaching your goal.

• Example: Without a scholarship I would not be able to attend college because______.

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