Essay Tips

 

Scholarship Essay Instructions

• The final essay should be ONE page only, font size 12, Arial or Times New Roman with a total of 6 paragraphs

• Each section of the body should have only two to three sentences.

• Have someone else review, provide feedback, and edit your essay.

• Do NOT include your name in the essay or on the essay.

• The foundational “My Story” essay can be “tweaked” and used over and over again to complete a majority of all required college admission and scholarship essays.

• Failure to follow these instructions may result in a disqualification of your application.

• Answer the questions below as a guide to organize your main ideas.

 

I. Introduction

 

The opening sentence and paragraph must catch the reader’s attention and interest.

II. Body

 

A. Family

• Describe your family: ethnic background, gender, country of origin, number of brothers/sisters, parents’ educational background and occupation.

• Mention any special circumstances such as: single parent home, illness, death, disability, divorce, or mobility.

 

B.   Obstacle, Overcoming, Character Qualities

• Describe one of your most challenging obstacles and how did you overcome it?

• What character qualities have you learned, are presently learning, or need to learn from your obstacle?

• Explain how this obstacle will help you to become successful in the future.

 

C. Community Service, Leadership, Role Model

• Describe two or three contributions you have made in community service.

• When and where have you served others?

• How has it made you a better person? What impact did you make?

• What did you learn about life, yourself, or other people?

 

D. Life Purpose, Direction of Study

• Explain your dreams for the future, educational, and career goals.

• What are the reasons you are seeking this field of study?

• How can you contribute to society or make a difference in the lives of others?

 

III. Conclusion

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• Why do you want to attend university/college? Why do you need a scholarship?

• Describe in detail any special family circumstances that will affect your ability to obtain assistance in reaching your goal.

• Example: Without a scholarship I would not be able to attend college because______.

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